write a summary

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i have an english homework , summary a about traits,  i will give u 20 traits , 10 for males , and 10 for females , what males like in females and vice versa , write 2 pages about it, with a chart
 
 
 i have wrote the homework but it’s too bad . read the attachment and do some corrects things to make it longer. don’t forget to put a chart for the traits 
 
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